Revisions to my Summary Paper

The revisions to my summary paper are mainly going to be gramatical and mechanical revisions. The citations of my quotes need to be revised. Based on my groups disscussion of my paper and the comments on my paper the only revisions I need to make are the ones in my puntuation. Based on the other papers in my group I plan to go through my summary to fine tune the ideas and to make sure I have a clear and concise thesis in my introduction.